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Many people have different opinions when it comes to airport security. In 2017, 3,324 (84 percent) of the total firearms discovered were loaded. Could you imagine what could happen if airport Security didn’t confiscate those firearms.  Some believe that there should be more protocols added, while others think that that the some of the protocols now are unnecessary. There could be many possible outcomes if airport security does not follow their protocol when it comes to checking passengers’ baggage. It only takes one insane person to make a risk and hurt many of innocent people. Airport security is rigorous and detailed about what can be allowed to be brought into the plane. They prevent illegal drugs, terror threats, and human trafficking from entering the United States. Even though TSA officers are highly trained, Drug Traffickers still find a way to smuggle drugs through airport security. If the airport security were not doing its job of checking passengers and their b
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Airport Security

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Having airport screens passengers will reduce the chance of danger and make airports more efficient and faster.My question is all the security screening worth it or efficient.Sometimes they even let you just go by without getting screened nor checked.What if I had a bomb or drugs and security had no clue.I absolutely love this topic because people think airport security is useless and a waste of time.Some people even think they get picked out of the airport lines to be questioned just by the way they look or dress.So that makes it a touchy topic, but also brings an interesting argument.I personally think all the security is needed but sometimes it takes too much time or they even cross the line with checking people.Its a topic that can be viewed from both sides .
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College is A Waste Of Time

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The 4 pillars of an argument are Argumentative essay are Thesis statement, Evidence, Refutation and Concluding statement. I think in the first paragraph the thesis statement would be "I believe higher education is broken" which can be the writers opinion.Evidence which is based of facts and reliable source.The author provides evidence by quoting famous sociology professors.Then he gives us more evidence in passage 5 with his opinion on success of people who never graduated college.People like :Ellen Degeneres, Steve Jobs, and Michael Dell.The author is trying to persuade you with the facts and evidence he is bringing to the table.He wants you to eventually agree with him.Refutation is in paragraph nine. It says "Of course, some people want a formal education". He says not everybody should leave college and that it mainly depends on the career and path your pursuing.Refutation is in the passage because he is challenging and acknowledging the other side of the argumen
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About Me

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Hey my name is Randall Piedrahita and I am from Medellin, Colombia. I love to play soccer and I'm happy to be playing for GGC.My favorite professional soccer team is Arsenal FC.My favorite food is Sushi. I have one sister who is 27 and a niece that is 5.I love to travel to different countries and learn about all different types of cultures.Ive been to like 9 different countries and about 10 different states.Im a very outgoing person and have a funny sense of humor.
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Stand By Me

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In the music video "Stand By Me" by Mark Johnson he uses elements of Rhetoric to create an argument.Invention is the proof of how Mark Johnson needed to find in order to make the video.He needed to find many musicians that need somebody to stand by them or that related to the song so much. Mark Johnson needed musicians from all over the world singing the same song in their nature habitat.Disposition is how he arranged the arguments and ideas.The video is laid out by musicians by all over the world relating to the song and expressing their emotions through music.Style is the language suitable to the subject and audience.The lyrics to the song and the song itself appealed to me, because he found music as the language.Music is universal so everybody can understand it. The lyrics say "you going to need somebody to stand by me."So saying no matter who you are or how much money you have. Your going to need somebody to stand by you and help you.Memory rhetor knows his subj
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Critical Response

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The writer's general subject is whether or not violence is good or bad for a developing child. The purpose of the writer's argument is to show the benefits of exposing your children to violent content. The writer's position is that violence helps mold a child into an individual who can control their rage better, and can even help them to be well rounded individuals. The writer uses opinions more than fact to prove his point. He uses self-experience to explain his plight. The evidence the writer presents is usage of Melanie Moore P.h.D. from Standford University to back up his claims and his own account of personal experiences. Personal experiences have an impact on convincing somebody that violent media is good for kids ,but cant persuade somebody all the way. He needs to find stronger and more convincing sources that violent media helps kids. It would help the audience understand where he's coming from and make it more relatable. The example of the tw
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